Hola Aimee, I love your background it’s really pretty. I loved that you smiled and also I like dogs and puppys. I loved reading your blog post and I also go to Waitohu school. You could add a full stop or commers when you take breath in your writing? From Elisa
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ReplyDeleteI love your background it’s really pretty. I loved that you smiled and also I like dogs and puppys.
I loved reading your blog post and I also go to Waitohu school.
You could add a full stop or commers when you take breath in your writing?
From Elisa
thx so much i loved yours i looked at it it was very cool :)
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